Thursday, 18 February 2016

Where is the place I enjoy?

Where is the place I enjoy?

Where the weka 
stalks innocent people having a nice cold beer,
and screeches at the dogs.

Where dogs 
stink like dead fish 
and they bark at every bird that comes past. 

Where the sea looks as if it is breathing 
and the sea air smells kind of nice. 
The water sounds soothing and nice by the waves.

And that is why nikau bay is cool. 

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I am learning personification to put in my poem. I am going well with my writing. Because I can make my own ideas, and help people. It is going well because I have helped Hamish. Next step is to help multiple people at a time.



2 comments:

  1. I also like your simile Sam. "Dogs stink like fish" that reminds me of an unpleasant smell!!

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  2. And personifying the sea makes it come alive... It really does seem to breathe like a human. From Mum

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